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Geraldine
Member
Umm, the examiners report has this:
"Furthermore, due to limited resources, YOUTHSURE are passing on a large percentage of their risk to a third party through a reinsurance agreement. The effect being a reduction in long-term profitability."
I have two issues with this:
1. Whatever the second thing is, it's simply not a sentence. And yes, I know, you can understand what is being said but I think it's poor form for an examiners report to be anything short of grammatically correct (regardless of modern trends in writing etc.). Just saying.
2. I know the investor was a large investor in a large, established insurance company and would therefore be likely to know what reinsurance is. However, don't you think it's fairly "jargony" to refer to 'passing on... risk'?
Thoughts?
"Furthermore, due to limited resources, YOUTHSURE are passing on a large percentage of their risk to a third party through a reinsurance agreement. The effect being a reduction in long-term profitability."
I have two issues with this:
1. Whatever the second thing is, it's simply not a sentence. And yes, I know, you can understand what is being said but I think it's poor form for an examiners report to be anything short of grammatically correct (regardless of modern trends in writing etc.). Just saying.
2. I know the investor was a large investor in a large, established insurance company and would therefore be likely to know what reinsurance is. However, don't you think it's fairly "jargony" to refer to 'passing on... risk'?
Thoughts?