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Hi,
The sample answer includes recommendations to the board, from the notes i thought recommendations should always be avoid? Additionally, the sample includes details of the previous investment methods when we have only been queried about the new investment, would this not be a distraction?. sample answer also discusses the objectives, would the council not already be aware of these?
There is also emotive language such as "dramatic", should this not be removed?
Thanks
The sample answer includes recommendations to the board, from the notes i thought recommendations should always be avoid? Additionally, the sample includes details of the previous investment methods when we have only been queried about the new investment, would this not be a distraction?. sample answer also discusses the objectives, would the council not already be aware of these?
There is also emotive language such as "dramatic", should this not be removed?
Thanks